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[Star Square Shorts: Star Square's Lucky Penny (Part 1)]

Nice video! Also, I will give you a script for Part 2.

Daniel: Hi, I am Daniel, and welcome to Episode 2!
(Intro)
Daniel: La la la la la, walking to Shiny, la- (bumps into Shiny) I'm sorry, I didn't see you.
Shiny: That's okay. Plus, I made a new invention, the-
(After Shiny shows Daniel the invention, it explodes)
Shiny: Aw fudge.
Black Rectangle: (Black Rectangle throws water on Daniel and Shiny to clean the ashes off) Are you guys okay?
Daniel: Yeah, we're fine.
Blue Square: Sup, guys!
Black Rectangle: Oh, hi, Blue Squarioo!
Creepy (Shiny's brother): Hey, guys, I just installed TikTok, and it is so fricking cool. You should try it out.
Daniel: Really?
Creepy: Yeah!
Heart Square: Hey, guys, wazzup?
(Sticky randomly flew out of nowhere and sticks to Black Rectangle)
Black Rectangle: Do I feel something sticking onto me?
(Black Rectangle peels Sticky off of himself)
Black Rectangle: Oh, it's you!
Sticky: Whatever flew me right here, they better say sorry.
Shiny: Guess what; 2 days ago, I installed a Instant Recovery Center!
(The Instant Recovery Center crushes Blue Square, and recovers Blue Square then)
Blue Square: Sweet! Anything else?
Amy: Yeah, she also gave me a Pickle Grabbing Cup for my burger, since I hate getting my hands wet from the pickle juice.
Shiny: Well, it's true.
Daniel: Gotta go to school, see ya!
Everyone else: But wait, we have go to school too! See you at class!
(7:00 AM)
Shiny: I wasn't in the same class as you, but how was it?
Daniel: Pretty good! We went to math, guessed all questions right, had lunch, and school was over.
Shiny: Pretty neat.
Black Rectangle: I got blackberries, which I love.
Thing: Hi, stupid guys.
Shiny: Thing, stop being rude or I will blow your brains out.
Thing: I don't care you son of a (bleep).
(KABOOM)
(The Instant Recovery Center recovers Sticky, Black Square, Shiny, and Thing)
Shiny: See that?
(Episode ends)

StarSquareGuy responds:

Thank you. Although StarSchool JuniorHigh starts at 8:30.
And plus, The script was supposed to be after the events of the first part. (Don't edit it)
I was lazy to do 11:30 AM (science room) 12:30 PM (Recess), 1:30 PM (Sports) 2:45 PM (Writing a haiku), 3:50 PM (Grading tests), and 4:30 PM (Making origami).
Here is the actual script.
I made a HUGE nice change to it.
(The next day)
(At StarSchool JuniorHigh)
(8:30 AM)
Daniel (Me): Hello, Shiny! I am so glad you're here! Yesterday at school, Me and my friends we're doing a test, Me and Elly had lunch, We we're doing science, We we're at recess, we we're playing sports, We we're writing a haiku, and we we're doing origami!
Shiny: Yeah. One day was a LOT of fun! Another day with fun will be way better!
Elly: Oh, Hello there Shiny. Hey there Daniel! What are you guys doing?
Shiny: We're just talking about our day yesterday!
Daniel (Me): Yeah. It was fun!
Elly: Well, I actually also had fun doing the kind of stuff you we're talking about..
Daniel (Me): My Haiku was 'Shiny finding expen-sive diamonds' 'You can see me with co-logne' and 'Elly gives me flow-ers'.
Elly: (She giggles)
Daniel (Me): (blushes)
Daniel (Me): Shiny, Look! I found a lucky penny the day before yesterday!
Daniel (Me): I think it might be because of how I passed my test!
Elly: YEAH! DANIEL TOLD ME THAT WHEN SCHOOL STARTED YESTERDAY!
Shiny: Stop yelling, Elly!
Elly: Sorry Shiny.
Thing: Hello there.
Daniel (Me): Hey there, Thing.
Elly: Hello there fellow evil thing.
Thing: You must be that stupid dumb Daniel's lover.
Elly: You stop being mean to my darling!
Daniel (Me): Yeah. You're being rude, Thing.
Thing: Fine!
(A noise is heard)
Daniel (Me): What the hell was that?!
Elly: Yeah! What the f**k?!
Dynamite Square: Sorry, I was fixing the lightbulb, and I accidentally fell.